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(I should warn you that I'm probably going to spamming your email account as I methodically work my way through every story you've posted here. Just so you know.)
You're one of the few people I've ever seen write Cheriss. And would think to put Cheriss and Wes together in a serious, touching moment. And yet still gives Wes pitch-perfect lines like, "That you grew up this fast in the academy. He might try to make me go."
I'm trying to write Wes and Hobbie right now, and I feel like it's a constant battle not to try too hard to make him Jansonlike, because then he just falls flat and sounds like you're trying too hard. Your Janson sounds totally natural. I'm going to steal him.
You're one of the few people I've ever seen write Cheriss. And would think to put Cheriss and Wes together in a serious, touching moment. And yet still gives Wes pitch-perfect lines like, "That you grew up this fast in the academy. He might try to make me go."
I'm trying to write Wes and Hobbie right now, and I feel like it's a constant battle not to try too hard to make him Jansonlike, because then he just falls flat and sounds like you're trying too hard. Your Janson sounds totally natural. I'm going to steal him.